BA (Hons) Computer Animation Arts - UCA Rochester
Hi Almudena,What a great start. I love the title pages with simple colour choices and stamped imagery. More of this throughout would be a good thing. It all sets the tone very nicely. I also really love the pages and pages of thumbnails. Although I think you could perhaps add some colour to these pages. Maybe just coloured line art to make the drawings pop a little more.Here's an example from a previous student (Bharathi) which may give you some inspiration for presenting sketches - https://www.scribd.com/doc/140579263/Num-Num-The-Making-OfBeyond this, I think a bit more text could help to give context to certain pages. For example, the concept art pages look good, but we aren't told what exactly they are for. Just a simple page to explain what this section is for would help.I would also suggest looking at alternatives for the font you use in your main blocks of text. It looks to me like Comic Sans. Which is a fine choice for an animation that is aimed at children. But it is a font that people really hate, so maybe something similar, that feels childish and exciting, but has less history to it.Here are some more art books for inspiration - http://ucarochester-cgartsandanimation.blogspot.co.uk/2016/02/fao-caa-year-1-story-commission.htmlLots of exciting things here Almudena, so keep it up!